Post by S.W.A.T.K. on May 27, 2011 17:42:53 GMT -5
Okay, so, I'm working on a name for the character who lives forever, but I do know what he'll be doing. For now, let's just call him Jack.
Jack can't die. Unfortunately, he doesn't remember anything beyond a year ago, thanks to a nasty injury to the head he received (what happened exactly, he doesn't know). He is human, though, so he isn't completely unstoppable and he does feel pain. It is possible to keep him confined, you know.
Now, when Jack woke up, he discovered R.J. The problem is, nobody else did. When R.J. started moving furniture around, other people started screaming and running around in circles. Turns out, R.J. was a ghost. Or something like that.
R.J. can walk through wall, and move stuff without touching it (mostly because he can't touch it anyway). Also, when he gets agitated, so do his surroundings. The air gets cold, plantlife starts moving around as though there's a lot of wind, water moves more violently, and flames start to pull toward the place where R.J. is standing. Also, R.J. cannot float, or fly, or anything of the sort. He has to walk wherever he wants to go, just like everybody else.
Jack figured out recently that he could use R.J. to trick people into thinking that Jack was a very impressive illusionist. Jack now works as a street magician -- the best in the business, in fact. He could have his own show, but he doesn't want to commit to anything like that just yet. For now, he is content shocking the people on the streets.
Any suggestions? Anything that can be improved? Let the feedback begin!
Jack can't die. Unfortunately, he doesn't remember anything beyond a year ago, thanks to a nasty injury to the head he received (what happened exactly, he doesn't know). He is human, though, so he isn't completely unstoppable and he does feel pain. It is possible to keep him confined, you know.
Now, when Jack woke up, he discovered R.J. The problem is, nobody else did. When R.J. started moving furniture around, other people started screaming and running around in circles. Turns out, R.J. was a ghost. Or something like that.
R.J. can walk through wall, and move stuff without touching it (mostly because he can't touch it anyway). Also, when he gets agitated, so do his surroundings. The air gets cold, plantlife starts moving around as though there's a lot of wind, water moves more violently, and flames start to pull toward the place where R.J. is standing. Also, R.J. cannot float, or fly, or anything of the sort. He has to walk wherever he wants to go, just like everybody else.
Jack figured out recently that he could use R.J. to trick people into thinking that Jack was a very impressive illusionist. Jack now works as a street magician -- the best in the business, in fact. He could have his own show, but he doesn't want to commit to anything like that just yet. For now, he is content shocking the people on the streets.
Any suggestions? Anything that can be improved? Let the feedback begin!
Cool idea having Jack use R.J. to make him look like an illusionist. Lol. And if you would like a name I have one, Joseph Yossarian. Or Jack Yossarian if you want to keep Jack. I just think Yossarian is a cool name. ;D 
